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Echo · 21st March 2012, 04:27 AM

Did this a bit ago, and never posted it, i decided to make the boxing so it looked better. Just looking for critique.

Starbase1 · 21st March 2012, 06:39 AM

That's kind of neat!

About the only suggestion from me would be to tone down the saturation on the box colours, particularly the red. Your typical product box doesn't handle intense printed colours.

Echo · 21st March 2012, 06:41 AM

thanks. now that you mention it i noticed it to, thats why i love critiques.

Starbase1 · 21st March 2012, 07:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Echo

thanks. now that you mention it i noticed it to, thats why i love critiques.

I think if you could add a little bump, like rough cardboard, that would sell it even more...

Echo · 21st March 2012, 07:12 AM

for sure, that was my next step.

Rigel · 21st March 2012, 09:15 AM

The helicopter looks neat.

One little weird thing though. On the white blocks that stick out to the side, right at the bottom of the red blocks, it looks like one or two of the knobs are transparent. It may be the colour doing some kind of trick, I don't know, but it's like I can see the edge of the red block through the knob of the white block.

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21st March 2012, 06:39 AM	#2
Starbase1 Contributing Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: London Posts: 8,190	That's kind of neat! About the only suggestion from me would be to tone down the saturation on the box colours, particularly the red. Your typical product box doesn't handle intense printed colours.
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Echo Registered Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 23	thanks. now that you mention it i noticed it to, thats why i love critiques.
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Echo Registered Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 23	for sure, that was my next step.
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21st March 2012, 09:15 AM	#6
Rigel Moderator Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: London (the other one, in Canada) Posts: 17,493	The helicopter looks neat. One little weird thing though. On the white blocks that stick out to the side, right at the bottom of the red blocks, it looks like one or two of the knobs are transparent. It may be the colour doing some kind of trick, I don't know, but it's like I can see the edge of the red block through the knob of the white block.
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