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Old 21st Mar 2012, 04:27 AM   #1
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Default Ad Related - Knex Helicopter

Did this a bit ago, and never posted it, i decided to make the boxing so it looked better. Just looking for critique.
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Old 21st Mar 2012, 06:39 AM   #2
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That's kind of neat!

About the only suggestion from me would be to tone down the saturation on the box colours, particularly the red. Your typical product box doesn't handle intense printed colours.
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thanks. now that you mention it i noticed it to, thats why i love critiques.
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thanks. now that you mention it i noticed it to, thats why i love critiques.
I think if you could add a little bump, like rough cardboard, that would sell it even more...
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for sure, that was my next step.
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The helicopter looks neat.

One little weird thing though. On the white blocks that stick out to the side, right at the bottom of the red blocks, it looks like one or two of the knobs are transparent. It may be the colour doing some kind of trick, I don't know, but it's like I can see the edge of the red block through the knob of the white block.
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