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11th March 2012, 08:27 AM
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*meh*
Not crazy with how this one turned out.. too much flying around, not enough happening. Also doesn't seem to be much flow from one shot to the next. Think I'll start over from shot 1. First things first, stuff needs to happen! Pegasus should start blasting away as soon as it comes into frame, and probably wouldn't hurt for the raiders to actually do something in response  The way it's stitched together right now Pegasus jumps in ready to fight, and then sits and waits for a whole minute. Same for the cylons. |
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11th March 2012, 10:59 AM
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yeah some missle trails weapons fire etc and youll really have something
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12th March 2012, 08:16 AM
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Overall I think it looks good. But it definitely needs some weapons fire in it and you may even be able to do that in post, if you have the tools for that.
Otherwise, consider this to be an animatic and go back to the drawing board! |
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3rd April 2012, 06:09 PM
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3rd April 2012, 10:52 PM
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The animation, reveal of the sun then the BS in the first one is excellent. Agree with the other guys that some missile trails and animated camera zooms and you've got it nailed. Nice work.
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4th April 2012, 08:46 AM
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Viper Pilot: "Raiders at 12 o'clock! Everybody flock off!"
At first it looked like a ripple effect, like everything was passing behind a lens. |
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21st July 2012, 08:56 AM
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 This may wind up being my last big project for a while, so I may as well put some effort into it. Too much stuff to do in real life, can't afford to keep pouring time into a hobby the way I am now  |
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21st July 2012, 12:01 PM
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 Some small updates |
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21st July 2012, 04:29 PM
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At this point, my revisions are mostly focused on the spindle
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21st July 2012, 05:41 PM
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Didn't get as much done as I had wanted to
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22nd July 2012, 10:00 AM
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22nd July 2012, 11:47 AM
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22nd July 2012, 12:06 PM
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 Self illumination rig... despite the fact that there really aren't any visible light sources on this thing |
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24th July 2012, 11:31 AM
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Looks great! I always wondered why there were dozens of available classic basestars, but no real new ones.
I would so love to blow it up for you As you can see, my texturing and modeling of my basestar has a lot of be desired |
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26th July 2012, 06:22 PM
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26th July 2012, 09:55 PM
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I liked your YouTube video from March, don't know how I missed it, where did you get the Pegasus mesh? I have an older one that's not textured I got off sci Fi meshes years ago. This is the best basestar mesh I've seen. If you decide to release it please let me know.
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27th July 2012, 04:26 AM
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Today graciously offered to share the basestar mesh, and posted a gorgeous full res beauty shot in the finished section. btw -- I really Love that self-illuminated rig it comes across beautifully.
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27th July 2012, 05:56 AM
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I can't release the updated version of Pegasus though, since I basically can't reach the original author anymore.. and I'm not re-uploading someone else's mesh without their ok |
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27th July 2012, 01:07 PM
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