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Old 4th April 2012, 06:47 AM   #1
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Default Transportation - Bmw M5 F10

This is my new WiP of BMW M5 F10.. Hope u like it for now
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Old 4th April 2012, 08:39 AM   #2
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It's a great start. I find it interesting that you started with the hood.
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Old 5th April 2012, 08:48 AM   #3
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Thx man
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Old 9th April 2012, 04:44 PM   #4
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Here is something new from me, I will model everything, I won't put opacity for grill or something like that There are some bumps, but I'll fix that, what you think?
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Old 23rd April 2012, 06:07 PM   #5
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New update - Wheel
Hope u like it
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Old 23rd April 2012, 06:21 PM   #6
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All looks good, nice clean geometry, although I am sure you could make the wheel/rim more polygon efficient by remove a few of them edge loops, it will still hold it shape with half the amount
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Old 24th April 2012, 09:31 AM   #7
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Thanks EDEN, I will probably optimize it when I finish the whole wheel
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Old 25th April 2012, 07:42 PM   #8
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I can't wait for the next update on this one.

Very nice work on the front end - and the grill looks great!
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Old 26th April 2012, 03:31 PM   #9
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@Polygonally_Impared - Thanks so much

So, here is a new update, I added holes, lugs and BMW logo, and fixed geometry
Hope u like it for now
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Old 2nd May 2012, 04:24 PM   #10
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Just wanted to show you on what I am these days, this is just to see how should it look so I have to fix a looot of things, hope u like it for now
BTW - First pic is the newest, it has that line on the doors
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Old 2nd May 2012, 05:20 PM   #11
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Looks like you have a very good "quad" flow. Sometimes that's the hardest part. Looking good! Keep it up!

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Old 3rd May 2012, 05:41 AM   #12
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Looks like you have a very good "quad" flow. Sometimes that's the hardest part. Looking good! Keep it up!

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Old 3rd May 2012, 08:41 AM   #13
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Detailizing roof
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Old 3rd May 2012, 11:26 AM   #14
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Really looking forward to seeing this finished. The crease on the side panels/door looks a little soft though?
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Old 3rd May 2012, 12:30 PM   #15
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Really looking forward to seeing this finished. The crease on the side panels/door looks a little soft though?
Thanks man, I fixed that but I loaded wrong file
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Old 3rd May 2012, 12:33 PM   #16
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Was a little bored so I added rear roof spoiler and almost finished the roof, hope u like it
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Old 3rd May 2012, 06:13 PM   #17
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Still some top notch work going on.
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Great progress….really nice work too well done!!….different HDRI for the final render this time round though
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Old 4th May 2012, 03:52 PM   #19
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Thanks guys
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