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Old 11th Mar 2012, 11:26 AM   #1
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Default Star Trek - Over Clouds

Here is the fantastic E from nightfever.
The Jets are from no one.
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Old 12th Mar 2012, 08:02 AM   #2
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It's a nice image except for a glaring scale problem.

Either the Enterprise is only about twice the size of your average transport truck, or the F-15 behind the Enterprise is really freaking huge!
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Old 12th Mar 2012, 10:05 AM   #3
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Is the f15 to great ????
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Old 12th Mar 2012, 11:16 AM   #4
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Trekki. I like the idea, but as Rigel pointed out, either the jets are too big or the Enterprise is too small. I would do a cople of things:

1) Increase the size of the Enterprise and move it so part ofthe ship is off the too p fthe screen. This will make it seem much larger than it really is.

2) Move one of the jets closer to the camera so it looks like it's flying straight at the camera

3) Move the other jet farther away so it looks much smaller

Kind of like this... (please forgive the quick paint sketch)

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That Enterprise is, I think, over 2,000 feet long. The F-15 Eagle is somewhere around 65 to 70 feet long. So if the Enterprise was closer to the camera than the Eagle, as your picture suggests, then the Eagle would have to be around 1,500 feet long to look that big compared to the Enterprise.

Try Treybor's suggested composition and see how that works.
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Old 12th Mar 2012, 07:34 PM   #6
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also, the clouds are too bright in my opinion. I like the concept though, reminds me of the original series episode Tomorrow is Yesterday.
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Thank you for all commend.
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