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Old 1st Jun 2008, 11:16 PM   #1
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Default Star Trek - Ships of the Federation Civil War

Some of you have seen my Bajoran Interceptor.
It's part of an idea for a story I may or may not gett around to working on but it involves a Federation Civil War. I won't go into to much detail about it but it does involve section 31 and takes place a few years after Nemesis.
These are some of the other ships I've been working on for it. Many of them are just roughly blocked in, some have more detail.
The first ship is well, one of my first ideas. This is the most I've done to it. Don't really know where I'm going with it.
The second ship I'm calling the Redwood Class.
The third ship is based on a design by FASA called the Claymore Class.
Next is a very experimental ship with no name yet.
A very rough idea of a ship based on one of the sketches of the Enterprise E.
And a design of a Cardassian ship by Rutger Warrink.
After that. Another rough look at a ship designed to replace the Oberth Class ship.
This is a ship based on an early design for Voyager.
I intend to place the rest of the ships involved in this thread so I don't have to start a new thread for every ship.
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Old 1st Jun 2008, 11:39 PM   #2
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Old 1st Jun 2008, 11:43 PM   #3
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More ships.

You've got the Klingon Bird Of Honor.
Another Cardassian design by Rutgar Warrink.
Just some more rough ideas for ships.
Next to last is one of the most detailed ships I'm working on and I stopped because I was getting burned out on it since it does have interiors.
I just did the last ship. It's a Vulcan ship based on the ones in the TNG episode Unification. This version of the ship is much larger. About the size of a Romulan Warbird.
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Old 2nd Jun 2008, 07:17 AM   #4
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LOL, Reaperman and I did a Federation Civil War series way back when, about 8 years ago or so. At first I thought maybe you had been working with him on the idea, funny how things come back around.
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Old 5th Jun 2008, 08:55 PM   #5
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It's a recent idea I had.

UPDATE..
I decided to take a week off from texturing my Bajoran Intercepter and get some more work done on my Cardassian ship.
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Old 6th Jun 2008, 10:04 PM   #6
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UPDATE...
More bits and pieces have been added. I plan on adding several modified details from the Galor class.
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It's a recent idea I had.

UPDATE..
I decided to take a week off from texturing my Bajoran Intercepter and get some more work done on my Cardassian ship.
No worries I wasn't suggesting you lifted it, I just found it funny how ideas come, go and come back again. I'll see if I can find the old site we had up at one point, you might find it enjoyable.
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UPDATE...
Didn't get a chance to post these over the weekend because I wasn't home. Too busy seeing a kick ass concert.
Shots of the the two cargo bays. At least that's what I'm calling them. The only image of this ship that I have to work on is a top view so all the othe view details I have to make up.

Just another top view.

Shots of the back. I rebuilt the flux chiller thing. And I'm detailing the spikes. Also added an upper sensor pallet. I'm beginning to add things not in the original design because it is too simple.
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Old 12th Jun 2008, 03:12 AM   #9
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I love the detail-work you put into this.
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UPDATE...
More Cardassian goodness.
I made cut outs on the side of the ship for greebles.
I also decided to make the spikeas at the back kind of look like the cut outs on the outer rim of DS9. I also added aft disrupters. Two more vents added to the botom of the ship to match the one on top.
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UPDATE..
The ship is now officialy infested with greeebles.

And a close up of some minor detail done to the aft disrupters.
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Old 29th Jun 2008, 08:44 PM   #12
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Excellent work... the modeling looks smooth and clean
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Old 1st Jul 2008, 03:46 AM   #13
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Good to see you're still doing this kinda stuff! Check out mine sometime.
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I have taken a look at some of your stuff before I started posting my own. I really liked your NX-01. To bad you lost it. I hate when that happens.

UPDATE...
Getting around to working on the textures for the front of the ship and the bottom.
As you can see I have an ugly seam where the the lower and side textures meet.
I think in the second picture I might have found a way to lessen that seam by useing a blend material.
I'm still working on these so I haven't dirtied them up as much as I would like to.
These things are kicking my ass. I hate textures.
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UPDATE...
Since I think I've gotten over the hump of those stupid seams I feel better about moving forward.
I've started the textures for the upper part of the bridge. I have to dent, scratch and scrape it up a bit more.
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UPDATE...
More greebles for the Cardassians. I'm rather happy with them.

Just a distance shot to see if the greebles hold up.

I'm starting on the front part of the ship. This should look like the one on the Galor class ship but my references are crap here so I'm make some of it up.
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A few more things to end the night.

UPDATE...
I decided to pull out my old unbuilt plastic model of the Galor to figure out the look of the front part of the ship and decided on what you se in the pic. I also made some changes to the yellow parts and I am much happier with them now. Although I will rebuild them tio have the ridges that the Galor has.

I made a little change the the wings by adding a small extra layer. I think it looks much better now.

The last picture I did mostly for fun. I was thinking that Section 31 and the Freemasons could be part of the same nutty bunch.
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Old 17th Jul 2008, 05:44 PM   #18
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UPDATE...
Not much but I've almost got the wing textures done. I just have to make a few changes to keep them rom looking exactly the same.
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UPDATE...
I thought I'd try to make an LCAR display so I did on for the turbolift of the U.S.S. Soval.
Done in photoshop.
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Looks dammed cool Fozz!
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UPDATE...
Did more work on the display for the turbo lift.

I have also begun to greeble the spikes of the Cardasian ship.
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UPDATE...
I think as far as these greebles go, I'm done. I don't want to over do it.
I also added a cheese grater near the thing up front.
I've made a few changes to the turbolift display. I fixed the font and a few of the jaged edges. Thanks to Bill Morris over at Okudagram.com for pointing me in the right direction for the font.
Last is aprototype for a door control display. The turbolift probably will need one.
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UPDATE...
In the first picture you can see I made some changes to the texture inside the engines. I think these make them appear a little less boring.

The second picture shows the textures for the airlock hatch and the landing pads.
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UPDATE...
The first phase of the bottom textures.
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UPDATE...
Textures for the airlock are done. Just a few things to fix and a few tweaks and I'll be done.
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I looked over at the dedication plaques by Kmpr_rak at Okudagram.com and thought I'd try doing one. I went over to http://techspecs.acalltoduty.com/plaques.html to take a look at the templates. I decided to scrap most of it and start from scratch. Ignore the stardate since I'm not sure about that yet and I know nothing about how they are figured out, so in the end I will probably just make one up. The U.S.S. Defiant plaque that I have from the Franklin Mint was a great help.
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I have noticed a little something I have to fix but this is the final version. I may do a few alternate texture packs later on.
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Its magnificent !!! (jaw dropping)
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I agree... it's really come together in the final package
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