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Old 6th Dec 2018, 08:39 PM   #1
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Default SciFi - Carpathia Rescue Vessel

My latest commission work. The Carpathia Rescue Vessel. A rescue ship from a mid-tech level universe similar to that of Alien and Event Horizon. Still working on the aft end of the ship, but these are renders for the director to review and approve on overall shape and scale. The bottom needs more grunge and scorching. Comments and critique always welcome
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Old 7th Dec 2018, 07:20 AM   #2
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Looks fantastic Sean!
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That's a great looking model, Sean! Looks solid, tough and very practical as a rescue craft!
My only criticism is that the vectored thrust side engine cowlings are too sharp edged and could do with a bit of rounding off.
Lovely work!
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Very cool looking ship. Hope she's not rescuing the space Titanic.
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That's a great looking model, Sean! Looks solid, tough and very practical as a rescue craft!
My only criticism is that the vectored thrust side engine cowlings are too sharp edged and could do with a bit of rounding off.
Lovely work!
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That's a good point. I was thinking of reworking them into a more hexagonal or octagonal profile, to make them less dull. I want them to be utilitarian, but also interesting to look at. I also have some tweaking at the back that needs to be done. The engine vents are too shallow on the main drive.


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Looks the part Mr!
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I got the reference Sean, and had a snarky comment ready to go, but thought it might be in bad taste.
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Looks great. What is it for? game/movie etc?
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