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14th June 2012, 03:01 PM
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Architecture - Elegant Bathroom Final
These are the finals of my bathroom. I watched the free intro part of the modeling a bathroom lectures on digitaltutors.com and totally enjoyed the design and tried to make my own. Here's the result.
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14th June 2012, 03:39 PM
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That's really very nice. Overall, I love the design and concept very much.
But it would expect there to be more refelcted light in the room. It seems very dark at the moment. With the lights in the room I'd expect it to be twice as bright. Right now it looks like it's lit by one or two candles. Second, the tub loks a little too matte. It should be glossier and reflect more of the ambient light in the room. Because they are white they do that very well. Third, the towels are very obviously low poly. I would increse the poly count along the curved edge, or sub-patch them and give them a displacement or normal map |
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14th June 2012, 04:57 PM
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hay your paint is peeling a little in the far corner...
Na just kidding.. Looks awesome..  |
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14th June 2012, 06:05 PM
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Over all .. really nice. Love the design and layout. The chrome just screams for more AA passes. I know that its really reflective, but you may want to put just a touch of reflection bluring on it. It looks almost to reflective right now. The floor is spectacular.
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15th June 2012, 12:35 AM
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Looks great. I agree with Treybors comments about brightness etc. get a weird optical illusion in it. In the last pic, if you look right in the middle of the ceiling sneaks area, the gap between the panels begins to look like a grid of pipes seen from above
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1st July 2012, 05:21 PM
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Congrats on the front-page slot for July.
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2nd July 2012, 07:11 AM
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Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
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2nd July 2012, 09:54 AM
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Another fantastic addition the front page. Welcome to the party dude. Wonderful work !
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2nd July 2012, 05:29 PM
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It is quite elegant, very very nice.
 And not trying to be critical by any means. But the only small detail my eye is missing is a waste basket, and like I said that's just a small detail. But still, extremely excellent work. |
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2nd July 2012, 06:15 PM
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Thank you friends. Glad you enjoyed - and I appreciate for all the highly constructive critiques and suggestions.
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3rd July 2012, 06:16 AM
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Lovely imagery, Great FP addition
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3rd July 2012, 12:18 PM
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Thanks Eden!
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23rd April 2013, 08:58 AM
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Good taste
Brilliant, even though, as mentioned already, a bit too dark. What about a different bath tub, see here: http://gb.toto.com/
Also love the colors. |
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23rd April 2013, 01:23 PM
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Location: Goldthwaite, Texas
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That's a nice bathroom, a bit modern for my taste but you did a great job.
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