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Old 24th Mar 2009, 10:48 AM   #1
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Default Stargate - Stargate: F-302

Started some days ago to work on the F-302 from Stargate. I worked on the central engine so far, but i have just found some imperfections that i have to correct it. Actually i'm going to realize the SGA version, and probably i'll do also the SG1 version. the main differences are:
1) the central engine, you can see it in the episode finale of SGA;
2) the 'belly' part (sorry don't know how to call it); you can see it in the episode Gemini (SG1, 8x11) where an F-302 were used to launch an artificial satellite in orbit.

For the ones don't know what is an F-302, here there are 3 images:
first, second, third.

Comments and Critiques always welcome!
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 11:12 AM   #2
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Nice start!
How detailed have you decided to go with this?
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 11:14 AM   #3
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Looks like a good start so far, looking forward to see how you get on with the rest of this
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 11:24 AM   #4
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thanks mates!

@Mikala: i want to go as close as possible. i asked to Al3d if he could send me some references of the real studio model, but unfortunately, they can't be released to the public! I'm using all the screencaps from the episodes and hope to do a good work.
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 01:06 PM   #5
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thanks mates!

@Mikala: I asked to Al3d if he could send me some references of the real studio model, but unfortunately, they can't be released to the public
lmao, like that's ever stopped him before.
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 01:12 PM   #6
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Nice, always loved this plane/ship thingy.
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 02:28 PM   #7
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Nice engine model.When you finish f-302 model?
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Old 24th Mar 2009, 04:21 PM   #8
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thanks!
@karbo: i don't know when i'll finish this. hope very soon!

here's a little updats.
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Old 25th Mar 2009, 07:43 AM   #9
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You doing this engines from some pictures or you doing as you think it is look like?
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Old 25th Mar 2009, 08:25 AM   #10
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i'm using the screencaptures and some blueprints from Al3d version.
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Old 25th Mar 2009, 03:50 PM   #11
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Oh no, it's the dreaded triangle indentation thingies again.

Looks like a good start on this.
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Old 26th Mar 2009, 08:25 AM   #12
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Thanks Rigel,
a new update...
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Old 26th Mar 2009, 08:38 AM   #13
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Keep going it's looking good so far!
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Old 26th Mar 2009, 09:15 AM   #14
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Looks very good and I can't wait to see her finished.
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Old 26th Mar 2009, 10:31 AM   #16
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Truly great start! Keep it going
Btw. interresting to notice that there's many modellers here who start with engines. Detailing included, then move on. For me, I always start with basic desing as in whole model, then detail lastly. Well I don't think one is better way than the other, just making note here.
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Truly great start! Keep it going
Btw. interresting to notice that there's many modellers here who start with engines. Detailing included, then move on. For me, I always start with basic desing as in whole model, then detail lastly. Well I don't think one is better way than the other, just making note here.
ehehh! in my opinion it's the easiest part to do, not only here in the f-302, in a lot of ships. When i did the Aurora also started with the engine to know exactly the size of the rest of the ship.
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Old 26th Mar 2009, 10:37 PM   #18
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ehehh! in my opinion it's the easiest part to do, not only here in the f-302, in a lot of ships. When i did the Aurora also started with the engine to know exactly the size of the rest of the ship.
I have one wip shipmodel which is otherwise finished, just lacking engines
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I have one wip shipmodel which is otherwise finished, just lacking engines
LOL

small update, now i can start to work on the wings!
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Nice update... pulls up a chair...
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Thanks delta.

I worked on the the wings for a while, and that are the hard parts to realize of this fighter.
now i have to fix some issues, and then i'll add some more details on the wings.
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Old 29th Mar 2009, 12:16 PM   #22
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Nice work so far, looks the part
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Thanks Meurig!
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Everything looks great except I can pretty much guarantee that the lines aren't that thick on the wings.
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I have no idea what a Stargate F-302 looks like so I can safely say;

hey now, that's looking really good!
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Thanks mates,
@ Phoenix: yes you are right, i'm trying to fix it, but i've done a mistake in the modifier list in max, so it'll be difficult!

New small update, i want to made the secondary (smaller) engines.
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I'm working on the bottom, i've done a couple of pics to find some errors. Tomorrow i'll start with the landing gears.
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That is one cool looking ship!
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